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 # n[at]vim 
-my neovim configuration.
+its neovim configuration.
 
-it does the things I need it to and has a startup time between 25 and 50ms, which are the things I care about.
+it does the things this thing needs it to and has a startup time between 25 and 50ms, which are the things it cares about.
 
 it also looks reasonably good [[citation needed]](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Citation_needed).
-![screenshot of my neovim config](./assets/image.png)
+![screenshot of its neovim config](./assets/image.png)
 
-the configuration is a bit of a mess. I will probably fix it at some point.
+the configuration is a bit of a mess. natalie will probably fix it at some point.