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 <h2>I am annoyed by this medium</h2>
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 this medium presents thoughts in a 1 dimensional manor without an ergonomic way to link between different posts. 
-this annoys me because information I generally tend to think of information such that each concept is a node and each relationship between concepts is an edge between those nodes on a two dimensional graph. 
+this annoys me because I generally tend to think of information such that each concept is a node and each relationship between concepts is an edge between those nodes on a two dimensional graph. 
 the format of this webpage does not allow for such structure due to the linearity.
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 perhaps a "digital garden" or similar system would be a better means of managing this page.